So whaddya think of the script?

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So whaddya think of the script?

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Here's a script outline I came up with a few hours ago.... what do you all think? Also I'm looking for a good title.... somehow Clear comes to mind but I can't explain how it relates to the movie. Hopefully in a month or two you'll see a 10 minute or so "student film" posted on here :) I hope I can get it done that quicky.

http://fragwerkz.com/ff/viewtopic.php?t=5
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Post by Top Gun »

Oooh...creepy :P.
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Sounds a lot more like a Twilight Zone episode than a movie.
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Lol :) Well I wanted to make this a very short movie.. 10-15 minutes, just something small, cheap, and easy to do. The thing I'd need to most to make this script come to life is really good actors. Sound and lighting would also be very important, but I think I got that covered.
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Post by roid »

nice :D
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Post by Sage »

I have one question: do they fux
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yea! fuxing is cool
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They meet, and sheâ??s the most beautiful girl heâ??s ever met.
One question : how are you going to get an actress for this script without it looking like a come-on in some way :P

YOU : Hey, you're hot! Can you be in my script?

HER : I don't act.

YOU : No problem! It's mostly just for the movie... Mostly.
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Post by Nitrofox125 »

No fuxing :( Maybe some kissing. Or something like that :)

As far as the hot girl goes, what will make this movie is the acting, not how good someone looks. I would rather have a good actress than a good-looking girl, and looking at the drama department in the school, I don't think I'll have a problem finding a girl with both. But I've already thought about the problem you described DT, but I'm not looking to cast a hot girl just because I want to have a hot girl in a movie :) I just want someone that's not ugly that you could be really good friends with.
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