Enjoy,
https://vimeo.com/69294764
My first animated short film
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Re: My first animated short film
No replies eh? That's cool.
This place seems a tad dead.
This place seems a tad dead.
Re: My first animated short film
Well, yeah this section (the gallery) is a bit dead as of lately.
I suppose that is because most users are busy arguing at the Ethics & Commetary or NHB sections, and some others are busy on their mission projects, (ahem) lol
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But no worries, I'm gonna check out your animation and give you some feedback.
I suppose that is because most users are busy arguing at the Ethics & Commetary or NHB sections, and some others are busy on their mission projects, (ahem) lol
.But no worries, I'm gonna check out your animation and give you some feedback.
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Re: My first animated short film
well heck, I'll reply!
I actually missed this.
First, I like it. It's not something I'd watch every day but it's interesting. The vid alone would have annoyed me but the title was suited well as it framed the work's content well. the music was perfect. It set the mood well and help the visuals flow and saying that, you mixed both mediums very well. There was a consistent flow and they didn't collide with each other.
My only negative: it was too long. Cut it down to 3 minutes or so. I'm not saying lop off the last 2 1/2 minutes. It just needs to be a bit shorter. re-edit it and and watch your emotional arch through out.
Pretty darn nifty for a first full go!
I actually missed this.
First, I like it. It's not something I'd watch every day but it's interesting. The vid alone would have annoyed me but the title was suited well as it framed the work's content well. the music was perfect. It set the mood well and help the visuals flow and saying that, you mixed both mediums very well. There was a consistent flow and they didn't collide with each other.
My only negative: it was too long. Cut it down to 3 minutes or so. I'm not saying lop off the last 2 1/2 minutes. It just needs to be a bit shorter. re-edit it and and watch your emotional arch through out.
Pretty darn nifty for a first full go!